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Gragutes who worked and poststudied after the graduation

Gragutes who worked and poststudied after the graduation Gqyg

The chart given illustrate the percentages of graduates from faculty of anthrpology who worked full time, used part-time work to study more or full-time to study only and finaly who didn't like neigther to work nor to study. From the information shown the majority spent most of his time to work while minority decided to work and study at the same time. It is surprised to notice that 12 percent not worked that may because the unavailability of free position in different places or may they prefere to marriage and stay at home for women more. Another 12 % liked what they studied and completed it beside work and without. More than three quarters of the graduates work part and full. Then there is a table to give more details of what sector they earned money from. The private insituations give least salaries while governemntal positions gave the largest salaries. Freelancers comes in between but it is good source to earn money from.

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 illustrate the percentages of graduates from faculty of Possible spelling mistake found.anthropology
anthrpology
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only
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neigther
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work
 nor to study.

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work
 while minority decided to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 and study at the same time.

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because
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different
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prefere
 to marriage and stay at home for women more. Another 12 % liked what they studied and completed it beside You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
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work
 part and full. Then there is a table to give more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 of what sector they earned money from. The private Possible spelling mistake found.insinuationsin situations
insituations
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least
 salaries while Possible spelling mistake found.governmental
governemntal
 positions gave the largest salaries. Freelancers This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
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but
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good
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