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Gragutes who worked and poststudied after the graduation

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The chart given illustrate the percentages of graduates from faculty of anthrpology who worked full time, used part-time work to study more or full-time to study only and finaly who didn't like neigther to work nor to study. From the information shown the majority spent most of his time to work while minority decided to work and study at the same time. It is surprised to notice that 12 percent not worked that may because the unavailability of free position in different places or may they prefere to marriage and stay at home for women more. Another 12 % liked what they studied and completed it beside work and without. More than three quarters of the graduates work part and full. Then there is a table to give more details of what sector they earned money from. The private insituations give least salaries while governemntal positions gave the largest salaries. Freelancers comes in between but it is good source to earn money from.
The chart
given
illustrate the percentages of graduates from faculty of
anthrpology
who worked full time,
used
part-time
work
to study more or full-time to study
only
and
finaly
who didn't like
neigther
to
work
nor to study.

From the information shown the majority spent most of his time to
work
while minority decided to
work
and study at the same time.

It
is surprised
to notice that 12 percent not worked that may
because
the unavailability of free position in
different
places or may they
prefere
to marriage and stay at home for women more. Another 12 % liked what they studied and completed it beside
work
and without. More than three quarters of the graduates
work
part and full. Then there is a table to give more
details
of what sector they earned money from. The private
insituations
give
least
salaries while
governemntal
positions gave the largest salaries. Freelancers
comes
in between
but
it is
good
source to earn money from.
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IELTS academic Gragutes who worked and poststudied after the graduation

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6.0
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