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the chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wells between 1918 and 2011. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Given is the graph illustrating the percentage of buying or renting houses in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011Overall both is it rented and owned households raised and dropped during the period of 93 years. There was the similar percentage and it was 1971-50%The owned accommodation has rise from 21% to 31% in 1980 to 1953. From 1939 21953 the percentage was stable. It increased in 1991 to 69%. Is that percentage of owned houses produced from 2001 to 2011 which was 62%. In 1918 the rented households increased about 78%. Then it declined from 1939 and 1953. Between 1961 and 1981 the percentage had a dramatic drop to 35%. The rented houses maintained the same level until 2001. In 2011 these household slightly increased and it was 38%.
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of buying or renting
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houses
in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011Overall both is it rented and
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owned
households raised and dropped during the period of 93 years. There was the similar
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percentage and
it was 1971-50%The
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owned
accommodation has rise from 21% to 31% in 1980 to 1953. From 1939 21953 the
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percentage
was stable. It increased in 1991 to 69%. Is that
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percentage
of
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owned
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produced from 2001 to 2011 which was 62%. In 1918 the rented households increased about 78%. Then it declined from 1939 and 1953. Between 1961 and 1981 the
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had a dramatic drop to 35%. The rented
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maintained the same level until 2001. In 2011 these household
slightly
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increased and
it was 38%.
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IELTS academic the chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wells between 1918 and 2011.

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