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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. awAed
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of households owning and renting accommodation in two different countries of the UK during the years 1918 and 2011. Overall, at the beginning of the period the rate of rented accommodation prevailed over owned one, however, after a certain period of time the situation has changed conversely. Initially, the percentage of households in rented accommodation was around 80%, whereas the owned accommodation was at the rate more than 20%. Afterwards, people living in England and Wales had an opportunity to increase the number of owned housing; as a consequence the figure of rented housing fell. In 1971 the percentage of both households was equal, which was 50%. Since 1971, the proportion of preferred to live in own home inclined dramatically. Therefore, in the year 2001, owned house has reached its peak, which was less than 70%. At the end of the period, the rate made up approximately 64%. The proportion of rented accommodation between the years 1971-2001, has decreased dramatically by 20%. Then, during the 10 years period it percentage wised by 5% roughly.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of households owning and renting
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accommodation
in two
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different
countries of the UK during the years 1918 and 2011.

Overall
, at the beginning of the
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period
the rate of rented
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accommodation
prevailed over
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owned
one,
however
, after a certain
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period
of time the situation has
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changed
conversely
.

Initially
, the percentage of households in rented
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accommodation
was around 80%, whereas the
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owned
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accommodation
was at the rate more than 20%. Afterwards,
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people
living in England and Wales had an opportunity to increase the number of
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owned
housing; as a consequence the figure of rented housing fell. In 1971 the percentage of both households was equal, which was 50%.

Since 1971, the proportion of preferred to
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live
in
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own
home inclined
dramatically
.
Therefore
, in the
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year
2001,
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owned
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house
has reached its peak, which was less than 70%. At the
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end
of the
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period
, the rate made up approximately 64%. The proportion of rented
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accommodation
between the years 1971-2001, has decreased
dramatically
by 20%. Then, during the 10 years
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period
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it percentage
wised by 5% roughly.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

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