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The chart below shows the number of four different species of fish between 1982 and 2007.

The chart below shows the number of four different species of fish between 1982 and 2007. Jxb5
The given tabular chart illustrates the number of four different kinds of fish, namely Atlantic cod, Haddock, Yellow fin tuna, and Swordfish from 1982 to 2007. The data was calibrated in numbers. Overall, the number of Haddock and Swordfish fishes remained constant over the time period, while it decreased from 1982 to 2007 with major fluctuations in case of Atlantic cod and Yellow fin tune fishes. Turning into details, in 1982, less than 50, 000 of Swordfish and it remained same in 2007. similarly, the number of Haddock fish was approximately 50, 000 between 1982 and 2007. In contrast, the number of Yellow fin tune inclined from 1, 50, 000 to 2, 00, 000 in 1992, before declining from around 1, 50, 000 to 1, 00, 000 in 2007. Likewise, the amount of Atlantic cod fishes showed downword from 2, 30, 000 to below 1, 50, 000 over the time period.
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of four
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Atlantic cod, Haddock, Yellow fin tuna, and Swordfish from 1982 to 2007. The data
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, the
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of Haddock and Swordfish fishes remained constant over the time period, while it decreased from 1982 to 2007 with major fluctuations in case of Atlantic cod and Yellow fin tune fishes. Turning into
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, in 1982, less than 50, 000 of Swordfish and it remained same in 2007.
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similarly
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of Haddock fish was approximately 50, 000 between 1982 and 2007.
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of Yellow fin tune inclined from 1, 50, 000 to 2, 00, 000 in 1992,
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declining from around 1, 50, 000 to 1, 00, 000 in 2007.
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, the amount of Atlantic cod fishes
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showed
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from 2, 30, 000 to below 1, 50, 000 over the time period.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the number of four different species of fish between 1982 and 2007.

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