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The chart below shows the median weekly gross income of emplyees in the UK in 2015.

The chart below shows the median weekly gross income of emplyees in the UK in 2015. JlYKw
The table illustrates the average revenue of working people in the United Kingdom in 2015. It is evident that majorly female employees’ income is lower than male no matter the age and the work shift. But in the column of female part-time employees we can see that women get more money than men from age 22 to 59. To begin, the income of full-time employees in age of 16-17 is approximately four times bigger than the revenue of those who work on a part-time job 147. 7 and 171. 6 pounds against 48 and 54. 8 what is a relatively small number. Then the table highlights the largest number of income of full-time male workers at age of 40-49, whereas the largest number for females is at age of 20-39. As for the part-time employees their highest income is at the same age, 40-49.
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in the column of female part-time
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that women
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22 to 59.

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of full-time
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of 16-17 is approximately four times bigger than the revenue of those who work on a part-time job 147. 7 and 171.
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against 48 and 54. 8 what is a
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number. Then the table highlights the largest number of
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of full-time male workers at
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of 40-49, whereas the largest number for females is at
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their highest
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, 40-49.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the median weekly gross income of emplyees in the UK in 2015.

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