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The chart below shows how much energy is provided by four different sources in Italy, and the table below shows how much of this energy is used for four different household purposes.

The chart below shows how much energy is provided by four different sources in Italy, and the table below shows how much of this energy is used for four different household purposes. KnY3R
The graph illustrates swimming increased in first half of decade parallelly with running. Then, whereas swimming lessoned steady, running continued to rise. Overall, it is clear that, while coal and gas compose marginally larger part of energy sources, wind saw by far the unpopular consumes. Furthermore, appliances and heating saw by far the most consumed, oppositely total of both charging and lighting were where near as lower as any other type of consume.
The graph illustrates swimming increased in
first
half of decade
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parallelly
with running. Then, whereas swimming
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lessoned
steady, running continued to rise.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that, while coal and gas compose
marginally
larger part of energy sources, wind
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saw
by far the unpopular consumes.
Furthermore
, appliances and heating
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saw
by far the most consumed,
oppositely
total of both charging and lighting were where near as
Did you mean "low"?
lower
as any other type of consume.

IELTS academic The chart below shows how much energy is provided by four different sources in Italy, and the table below shows how much of this energy is used for four different household purposes.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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