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the chart shows the results of a survey conducted in the uk in three different years regarding the level of interest in 6 particular sports

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The chart illustrates the results of a survey showing the amount of interest in six different sports in three years 1995, 2000 and 2005 in the United Kingdom. Overall, football was the most popular sport in all three years whilst, golf was the least common sport in the three years mentioned. According to what is shown, during the three years, football had the highest level of interest by almost 40%. However, the amount of interest in tennis went down roughly 30% in 1995 to reach roughly 25% in 2005. About the volleyball and swimming, they had exactly the same amount of interest through the three years mentioned. Furthermore, the level of interest in rugby showed a slight increase in the same three years. On the other hand, golf had the lowest amount, just under 20% in 1995 but it reached exactly 20% in 2005.
The chart illustrates the results of a survey showing the
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sports in three years 1995, 2000 and 2005 in the United Kingdom.

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, football was the most popular sport in all three years whilst, golf was the least common sport in the three years mentioned.

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in tennis went down roughly 30% in 1995 to reach roughly 25% in 2005. About the volleyball and swimming, they had exactly the same
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of
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through the three years mentioned.
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, the level of
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in rugby
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a slight increase in the same three years.
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under 20% in 1995
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it reached exactly 20% in 2005.

IELTS academic the chart shows the results of a survey conducted in the uk in three different years regarding the level of interest in 6 particular sports

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