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The chart below shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different kinds of digital games

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The bar chart illustrates the worldwide sales of four kind of electronic games such as Mobile phone games, Online games, console games and handheld games for seven years from 2000 to 2006. Overall, it is evident that only handheld games have become popular over the years and there are no sales of online games and mobile phone games in the year 2000. Handheld games has been continuously increasing its sales from 2000 to 2006 which raised from around 10 billion dollars to almost 18 billion dollars where as for console games the sales have been continuously decreasing from almost 6 billion dollars to around 4 billion dollars. In terms of online games the sales started from year 2001 with around 2 billion dollars and has improved to around 8 billion dollars by 2006 while for mobile phone games the sales started in 2002 and raised significantly from there to approximately 10 billion dollars in 2006 crossing the sales of online games.
The bar chart illustrates the worldwide
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of four kind of electronic
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such as Mobile phone
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,
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Online
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, console
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and handheld
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for seven years from 2000 to 2006.

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and mobile phone
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in the
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2000.

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has been
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from 2000 to 2006 which raised from
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to almost 18
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for console
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