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The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.

The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010. xm2jb

The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010. This chart illustrates the amount of money spent on five consumer goods such as cars, computers, books, perfume and cameras in France and the UK IN 2010. All numerals are measured in pounds sterling. Overall, the UK spent more much money in consumer goods than France in the period given. Both countries spent most of their money on cars, whereas the least amount of money was spent on perfume in the UK compared to cameras in France. The most significant difference in expenditure between the two countries was cameras. In terms of cars, people in the UK spent about 450 000$ on this as opposed to the French at 400 000$. Similarly, the British expenditure was higher on books than the French. For computers wasting money difference is not so considerable. The indicator is 350 000$ for UK and about 400 000$ in France. With a half of difference of expenditure on cameras the British spent 350 000$ while the French spent 150 000$. Just in one customer goods France spent more money than the UK, which the French indicator was 200 000$ and the UK one is 150 000$. In conclusion, both countries spent much money on costumer goods except perfumes. Totally, the British has a lot more costs than the French.

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