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The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district.

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The table gives the information about week sales at samll restaurant in a downstream business district from october 7th to 13th october. Overall, the highest sale rate is observed in dinner on 8th and 9th november. where as least revenue of restaurent is showed in lunch on sunday. According to the table, Lunch had on wednesday is the largest sales among all days which is 2595 dollars. The first two days of week expirenced same revenue of 2400 dollars. however, there is a slight decrease im sales rate on thursday nearly 2300$, but a slight rise of sales on friday same as monday. The weekends showed a least sales of $1950 and $1550 respectively. The earning from the dinner has great sales through out the week when compared to lunch. The sale of monday is $3623 and tuesday experienced a steady increase of sales nearly 3850 dollars, it continued to be remains same on tuesday. As regards, sales of thursday had decreased to 3800$ and continued to decline steadily at the end of the week, reaching around 2450 dollars on sunday
The table gives the information about
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week
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sales
at
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restaurant in a downstream business district from
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october
7th to 13th
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october
.

Overall
, the highest
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sale
rate
is observed
in dinner on 8th and 9th
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november
.
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where as
least revenue of
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restaurent
is
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showed
in lunch on
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sunday
.

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wednesday
is the largest
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sales
among all days which is 2595
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dollars
. The
first
two days of
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week
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expirenced
same revenue of 2400
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dollars
.
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however
, there is a slight decrease
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im
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sales
rate on
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thursday
nearly
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2300$
,
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a slight rise of
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sales
on
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friday
same as
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monday
. The weekends
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a
least
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sales
of $1950 and $1550
respectively
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The earning from the dinner has great
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sales
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through out
the
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week
when compared to lunch.
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The
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sale
of
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monday
is $3623 and
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tuesday
experienced a steady increase of
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sales
nearly
3850
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dollars
, it continued to be remains same on
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tuesday
. As regards,
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of
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thursday
had decreased to
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3800$
and continued to decline
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of the
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, reaching around 2450
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on
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sunday

IELTS academic The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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