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In the competative era of work , inhabitants have different tastes about their professional life.

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The given bar chart illustrates the proportion of British people who donated money for charity by different age groups in the period of 1990 and 2010. According to the given chart, the age group 18-25 donated the lowest contribution of money in both year among all age groups. On the other hand, age group 36-50 did the highest charity in the year 1990. It can be seen that, in the year 1990, the charity trand is significantly increased from the age 18 to 50. After that it was slightly decreased by old age groups. The age group 18-25 donated 15% and 7% money in the year 1990 and 2010 respectively. In contrast, more than 20% help was done by age 25-35 in the year 2010. It was picked at 43% by age group 36-50 in 1990. Moreover, the age group 36-50 and >60 donated similar proportion of charity in the year 2010, which was 35%. Furthermore, it was minimally increased under 40% by age group 51-65. Middle age group donated higher charity as compare to other age groups.
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36-50 did the highest
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1990.

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1990 and 2010
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36-50 in 1990.

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similar proportion of
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IELTS academic In the competative era of work, inhabitants have different tastes about their professional life.

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