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The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

It is clearly demonstrated from the given diagram that the number of crime incidents in Panama City in a period of time of 10 years starting from 2010 till 2019 come mostly from burglary, car theft, and robbery. Overall, burglary and car theft showed the highest progress in the number of crimes, while robbery showed the lowest. To begin with, burglary and car theft violations remain steady and display some similar numbers of crime. In 2010, burglary was the highest with almost 3500 happening while almost 3000 incidents from car theft. However, in 2011 burglary incidents dropped sharply at almost 2500 in 2013, while car theft stayed in the same line till 2012 and decreased slightly till 2013 by almost 2000, and they reached the same number in the med between 2013 and 2014 with almost 2000, but burglary kept decreasing till 1000 in 2015 and started to climb to 1500 in 2016 and kept steady till the end of the period. On the other hand, car theft incidents kept rising all over the years and reached the peak in 2019 by almost 3000 crimes. In contrast, the crime of robbery was the lowest in 2010 by almost 1000 incidents and kept in the same line until the end of the period of 2019.
It is
clearly
demonstrated from the
given
diagram that the
number
of
crime
incidents
in Panama City in a period of time of 10 years starting from 2010 till 2019
come
mostly
from
burglary
,
car
theft
, and robbery.

Overall
,
burglary
and
car
theft
showed
the highest progress in the
number
of
crimes
, while robbery
showed
the lowest.

To
begin
with,
burglary
and
car
theft
violations remain steady and display
some
similar
numbers
of
crime
. In 2010,
burglary
was the highest with
almost
3500 happening while
almost
3000
incidents
from
car
theft
.
However
, in 2011
burglary
incidents
dropped
sharply
at
almost
2500 in 2013, while
car
theft
stayed in the same line till 2012 and decreased
slightly
till 2013 by
almost
2000, and they reached the same
number
in the med between 2013 and 2014 with
almost
2000,
but
burglary
kept
decreasing till 1000 in 2015 and
started
to climb to 1500 in 2016 and
kept
steady till the
end
of the period.
On the other hand
,
car
theft
incidents
kept
rising all over the years and reached the peak in 2019 by
almost
3000 crimes.

In contrast
, the
crime
of robbery was the lowest in 2010 by
almost
1000
incidents
and
kept
in the same line until the
end
of the period of 2019.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019.

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