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The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

It is clearly demonstrated from the given diagram that the number of crime incidents in Panama City in a period of time of 10 years starting from 2010 till 2019 come mostly from burglary, car theft, and robbery. Overall, burglary and car theft showed the highest progress in the number of crimes, while robbery showed the lowest. To begin with, burglary and car theft violations remain steady and display some similar numbers of crime. In 2010, burglary was the highest with almost 3500 happening while almost 3000 incidents from car theft. However, in 2011 burglary incidents dropped sharply at almost 2500 in 2013, while car theft stayed in the same line till 2012 and decreased slightly till 2013 by almost 2000, and they reached the same number in the med between 2013 and 2014 with almost 2000, but burglary kept decreasing till 1000 in 2015 and started to climb to 1500 in 2016 and kept steady till the end of the period. On the other hand, car theft incidents kept rising all over the years and reached the peak in 2019 by almost 3000 crimes. In contrast, the crime of robbery was the lowest in 2010 by almost 1000 incidents and kept in the same line until the end of the period of 2019.
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crime
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incidents
in Panama City in a period of time of 10 years starting from 2010 till 2019
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come
mostly
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burglary
,
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car
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theft
, and robbery.

Overall
,
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burglary
and
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car
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theft
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showed
the highest progress in the
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number
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crimes
, while robbery
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showed
the lowest.

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with,
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burglary
and
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car
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theft
violations remain steady and display
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some
similar
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numbers
of
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crime
. In 2010,
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burglary
was the highest with
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almost
3500 happening while
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almost
3000
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incidents
from
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car
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theft
.
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, in 2011
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burglary
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dropped
sharply
at
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almost
2500 in 2013, while
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car
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theft
stayed in the same line till 2012 and decreased
slightly
till 2013 by
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almost
2000, and they reached the same
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in the med between 2013 and 2014 with
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2000,
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burglary
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kept
decreasing till 1000 in 2015 and
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started
to climb to 1500 in 2016 and
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steady till the
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of the period.
On the other hand
,
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car
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theft
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incidents
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kept
rising all over the years and reached the peak in 2019 by
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almost
3000 crimes.

In contrast
, the
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crime
of robbery was the lowest in 2010 by
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almost
1000
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incidents
and
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kept
in the same line until the
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end
of the period of 2019.

IELTS academic The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019.

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