Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama city from 2010 to 2019

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama city from 2010 to 2019 pRJra

The data provided in the chart illustrates, the alteration in level of three categories of crime in the Panama City in a time period of nine years. The details are calibrated in number of incidents per year. Overall, Burglary was at the highest peak in Panama city which eventually decreased becoming, the second most committed crime. Car theft and robbery remained stagnant throughout the time. The chart demonstrates, three type of crimes i. e. , burglary, car theft and robbery. The rate of burglary was at a level of 3500 in the beginning i. e. , 2010. After slightly increasing, it witnesses a sudden downward trend in the next five decades and reached a level of 1000 in 2015, and then resulted in being stagnant. Car theft on the other hand, remained at a level of 2800 for two years from 2010 to 2012, then after noticing a slight decrease, started fluctuating till 2019. Moreover, robbery remained at the same pace from the beginning of 2010 till the end of 2019 i. e. , 700.

The data provided in the chart illustrates, the alteration in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmatched
level
 of three categories of crime in the Panama City in a time period of nine years. The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
are calibrated
 in number of incidents per year.

Overall
, Burglary was at the highest peak in If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.Panama City
Panama city
 which eventually
 decreased becoming, the second most committed crime. Car theft and robbery remained stagnant throughout the time.

The chart demonstrates, three type of crimes There should be no space here: "i.e.".i.e.
i. e.
Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma,
 ,
 burglary, car theft and robbery. The rate of burglary was at a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmatched
level
 of 3500 in the beginning There should be no space here: "i.e.".i.e.
i. e.
Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma,
 ,
 2010. After slightly
 increasing, it witnesses a sudden downward trend in the next
 five decades and reached a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmatched
level
 of 1000 in 2015, and then resulted in being stagnant.

Car theft on the other hand
, remained at a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmatched
level
 of 2800 for two years from 2010 to 2012, then after noticing a slight decrease, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 fluctuating till 2019. Moreover
, robbery remained at the same pace from the beginning of 2010 till the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of 2019 There should be no space here: "i.e.".i.e.
i. e.
Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma,
 ,
 700. 