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The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

This line graph shows the crime in Panama city during the period from 2010 until 2019. Overall, the biggest change was in the number of burglaries, while the lowest in robbery. To begin with by the year of 2010, about 3, 400 cases were reported in burglary, according to robbery being the most common crime. Later in 2011, the cases rose to about 3, 700 but then declined until 2015. The figure then paused slightly over 1, 000 incidents. In 2016, the graph inclined and kept changing until 2010, where the number of stolen cars stayed at about 2, 800, until 2013, attended an identical trend to burglary. The number then increased to around 2, 200 in 2014, where it stood there before a slight drop in the same year. However, the trend was commonly upward from then on. In contrast, robbery and burglary have always been common issues for Panama city. The graph concluded that, through nine years, the number of theft cases altered narrowly.
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the crime in
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Panama city
during the period from 2010 until 2019.

Overall
, the biggest
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change
was in the
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number
of
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burglaries
, while the lowest in robbery.

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begin
with by the year of 2010, about 3, 400 cases
were reported
in
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burglary
, according to robbery being the most common crime. Later in 2011, the cases rose to about 3, 700
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but
then declined until 2015. The figure then paused
slightly
over 1, 000 incidents.

In 2016, the graph inclined and
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kept
changing until 2010, where the
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number
of stolen cars stayed at about 2, 800, until 2013, attended an identical trend to
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burglary
. The
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number
then increased to around 2, 200 in 2014, where it stood there
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before
a slight drop in the same year.
However
, the trend was
commonly
upward from then on.
In contrast
, robbery and
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burglary
have always been common issues for
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Panama city
. The graph concluded that, through nine years, the
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number
of theft cases altered
narrowly
.

IELTS academic The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019.

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