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The table shows the causes of land degradation by regions in 2017.

The table shows the causes of land degradation by regions in 2017. dWMX
The given table illustrates the reasons of land degradation by different regions in the year 2017. The percentage is used to measure the units. Overall, it can be seen that the high percent of land dwgraded for over-grazing while the less percent of land degraded for deforestation. As it presented in the given illustration that in Europe, more portion of land degraded for deforestation that other regions and 1. 7% of land degraded for deforestation by Oceania and 0. 2%of it degraded by North America. Turning to the other causes causes that 7. 7% in Europe and 3. 3% in North America of land degraded for over-cultivation. Oceania degraded most land for the over-grazing and Europe degraded 5. 5% for over-grazing and North America 1. 5% and in the given period, in total Europe 23%, North America 5%, Oceania degraded 13% of the land
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table illustrates the reasons of
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degradation by
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different
regions in the year 2017. The percentage is
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used
to measure the units.

Overall
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seen
that the high percent of
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land
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dwgraded
for over-grazing while the less percent of
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land
degraded for deforestation.

As it presented in the
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illustration that in Europe, more portion of
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land
degraded for deforestation that other regions and 1. 7% of
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land
degraded for deforestation by Oceania and 0. 2%of it degraded by
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North
America.

Turning to the other
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causes causes
that 7. 7% in Europe and 3. 3% in
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North
America of
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land
degraded for over-cultivation. Oceania degraded most
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land
for the over-grazing and Europe degraded 5. 5% for over-grazing and
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North
America 1. 5% and in the
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given
period, in total Europe 23%,
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North
America 5%, Oceania degraded 13% of the
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IELTS academic The table shows the causes of land degradation by regions in 2017.

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143 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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