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ar chart illustrates the different forms of gross domestic product (IT and Service industry) in the united kingdom from 1992 to 2000. These values are calculated in percentages

ar chart illustrates the different forms of gross domestic product (IT and Service industry) in the united kingdom from 1992 to 2000. These values are calculated in percentages Dlqwp
The given bar chart illustrates the different forms of gross domestic product (IT and Service industry) in the united kingdom from 1992 to 2000. These values are calculated in percentages. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that the output from the information technology sector significantly increased from 1996 to 2000. On the other hand, gross national product values from service sector increased gradually over the period. In detail, nearly 7 percentage of GDP was generated in the year 1992 by IT and these proportions grew to 8 per cent before decreasing slightly in the year 1996. From then on, there was a significant rise from 8 to nearly 15 percentage, which was the highest output in the given years. Although the GDP proportions of service industry increased, these rates are not significantly higher when compared to their counterparts. In the year 1992, 4 percentage of revenue generated by service sector, which was gradually increased up to 8 per cent in the year 2000. At the end of the period, the percentage of GDP from IT was almost twice that of the Service Industry.
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different
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Service
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from 1992 to 2000. These values
are calculated
in percentages.

Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that the output from the information technology sector
significantly
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increased
from 1996 to 2000.
On the other hand
, gross national product values from
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service
sector
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increased
gradually
over the period.

In detail,
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7
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percentage
of GDP
was generated
in the
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year
1992 by IT and these proportions grew to 8 per cent
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before
decreasing
slightly
in the
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year
1996. From then on, there was a significant rise from 8 to
nearly
15
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percentage
, which was the highest output in the
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given
years. Although the GDP proportions of
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service
industry
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increased
, these rates are not
significantly
higher when compared to their counterparts. In the
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year
1992, 4
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percentage
of revenue generated by
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service
sector, which was
gradually
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2000. At the
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IELTS academic ar chart illustrates the different forms of gross domestic product (IT and Service industry) in the united kingdom from 1992 to 2000. These values are calculated in percentages

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