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The chart below shows information regarding the average percentage of yearly income that people in the following countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment in a typical year.

The chart below shows information regarding the average percentage of yearly income that people in the following countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment in a typical year. b3R8q
The chart displays details regarding the typical percentage of annually profits come from food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment in the difference countries. In general, the percentage of income for food and drink, and housing has the highest number. On the other side, the clothing and entertainment has the lowest proportion in the table. Among five countries, consumer spending on housing and food and drink the most. Especially in UK, both of the number at this content is all the high one: 37% at housing, which is the highest number of the whole table and 27% at food and drink- the highest in this one is in Turkey for 36%. And the distance among five countries is not a huge one, except the housing of Spain, which is only 18% though the highest one is 37%. On the other side, clothing and entertainment is not the content that netizen consume as much as the two above. According to the table, there is a big transformation between the biggest and smallest number of percentage is 37% and 7%. - the clothing in France But among each country the space is not as far as between the whole table. There is a small distance of each country in these two contents.
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regarding the typical percentage of
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from
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food
and
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drink
, housing, clothing and entertainment in the difference
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countries
.
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, the percentage of income for
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food
and
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drink
, and housing has the highest
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. On the other side, the clothing and entertainment has the lowest proportion in the table.

Among five
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countries
, consumer spending on housing and
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and
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the most.
Especially
in UK, both of the
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at this content is all the high one: 37% at housing, which is the highest
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of the whole table and 27% at
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and
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the highest in this one is in Turkey for 36%. And the distance among five
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is not a huge one, except the housing of Spain, which is
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18% though the highest one is 37%.

On the other side, clothing and entertainment is not the content
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that netizen consume
as much as the two above. According to the table, there is a
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transformation between the biggest and smallest
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of percentage is 37% and 7%.
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the clothing in France
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among each
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the space is not as far as between the whole table. There is a
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distance of each
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in these two contents.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows information regarding the average percentage of yearly income that people in the following countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment in a typical year.

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