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The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries. Kwy73
The bar chart illustrates the data about the issues people experience while they live abroad. The problems vary according to three age groups. Overall, integration problem for the middle aged groups is much higher than other two. It is clear that people aged 35-54 have the most problem is sorting out healthcare which is at 37 %. This trend is a bit lower for young and old age groups, approximately 33 % and 36 % respectively.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries.

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