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The graph shows the money spent on different forms of entertainment in three continents over a 5-year period.

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The graph shows the money spent on different forms of entertainment in three continents over a 5-year period. The largest difference in the money spent could be seen in the USA from 1995 to 2000 where the expenditure went up by 73 dollars. Next comes Asia with the difference of 43 dollars, and at last comes Europe with the least difference of 34 dollars over a period of 5 years. A common trend in the graph is that the total money spent on entertainment has increased in all continents from 1995 to 2000. The amount of money spent on television, publishing, music, and cinema has also increased in respective years in all continents with minute differences of expenditure on cinema. Money spent on music in Europe has been the same for the time of five years. The USA has the greatest budget for television and publishing while Asia has the smallest.
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forms of entertainment in three continents over a 5-year period.

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in the USA from 1995 to 2000 where the expenditure went up by 73 dollars.
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Europe with the least
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of 34 dollars over a period of 5 years.

A common trend in the graph is that the total
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on entertainment has increased in all continents from 1995 to 2000. The amount of
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on television, publishing, music, and cinema has
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of expenditure on cinema.

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on music in Europe has been the same for the time of five years.

The USA has the greatest budget for television and publishing while Asia has the smallest.
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