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The bar chart illustrates the data about the issues people experience while they live abroad.

The bar chart illustrates the data about the issues people experience while they live abroad. BJgrd
The bar chart illustrates the data about the issues people experience while they live abroad. The problems vary according to three age groups. Overall, integration problem for the middle-aged groups is much higher than other two. It is clear that people aged 35-54 have the most problem is sorting out healthcare which is at 37 %. This trend is a bit lower for young and aged age groups, approximately 33 % and 36 % respectively. Middle- aged people have the most problem with money which is roughly at 35% in comparison to young people at just under 34%. Finding schools for children in another countries caused almost 18% of middle aged group. The least trend shows old aged people which is at about 3 % percent.
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates the data about the issues people experience while they live abroad.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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