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The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now ,and plans for its development

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development 0AlrB
The map gives data on the current case of a little town’s centre named Islip and projects for its improvement. Overall, the place witnessed dramatical changes during refurbishment process. In detail, at the beginning main road devides the city into 2 parts which consist of shops completely. Otherwise the major way has an access both to school on the left and a park on the right. Moreover, due to a new plan all the infrastructures are surrounded with dual carriageway. Consequently, countryside and shops which are situated on the north of the main road were demolished and instead of them new places were created. Firstly, bus station, shopping centre and car park appeared on the north side of Islip. At the bottom of these sites there was a way only for pedestrians nearby new housing accessing to dual carriageway. Then shops maintained the same level. At the south-east of the town there was a park that was included into the way, while housing and school were excluded into the other part of the way and school was just around the corner of the road.
The map gives data on the
current
case of a
little
town’s
centre
named
Islip
and projects for its improvement.

Overall
, the place witnessed
dramatical
changes
during refurbishment process.

In detail, at the beginning main road
devides
the city into 2 parts which consist of shops completely.
Otherwise
the major way has an access both to school on the
left
and a park on the right.
Moreover
, due to a new plan all the infrastructures
are surrounded
with dual carriageway.
Consequently
, countryside and shops which
are situated
on the north of the main road
were demolished
and
instead
of them new places
were created
.
Firstly
, bus station, shopping
centre
and car park appeared on the north side of
Islip
. At the bottom of these sites there was a way
only
for pedestrians nearby new housing accessing to dual carriageway. Then shops maintained the same level. At the south-east of the town there was a park that
was included
into the way, while housing and school
were excluded
into the other part of the way and school was
just
around the corner of the road.
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IELTS academic The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development

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