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The given chart illustrates the results of a questionnaire about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking behaviours in last 4 weeks in five different cities in Australia including Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart.

The given chart illustrates the results of a questionnaire about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking behaviours in last 4 weeks in five different cities in Australia including Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart. WMGa
The given chart illustrates the results of a questionnaire about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking behaviours in last 4 weeks in five different cities in Australia including Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart. It witnessed that went to a cafe for coffee of tea was the most popular habits compared to two others options. The first line is fresh coffee brought in last 4 weeks. The amount of residents in Sydney is highest, up to 43. 5%. Melbourne is the city where percentage of residents brought fresh coffee is nearly same amount as Sydney's with 42. 5%. Holding lower than 40% of residents are Hobart, Brisbane and Adelaide with 37%, 33% and 34. 5%, respectively. The second aspect is brought instant coffee. Brisbane has quite high in residents percentage, which is 53%. Other two cities have appoximately same amount as Brisbane are Melbourne and Adelaide with 47% and 49. 5%, repectively. Sydney occupies lowest in residents percentage, up to 43. 5%, which 11% lower than the highest one of Hobart. The third option is went to a cafe for coffee or tea. Melbourne and Hobart have the same amount of citizens and are in the top 2 of highest in percentage in 5 cities. Following that, Sydney occupies 62% of residents went to a cafe while Brisbane's is 55. 5% and Adelaide's is 49%. In general, the bar chart depicts the comparison between different habits of citizens in 5 cities in Autralia.
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in Sydney is highest, up to 43. 5%. Melbourne is the city where
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as Sydney's with 42. 5%. Holding lower than 40% of
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are Hobart, Brisbane and Adelaide with 37%, 33% and 34. 5%,
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while Brisbane's is 55. 5% and Adelaide's is 49%.
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IELTS academic The given chart illustrates the results of a questionnaire about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking behaviours in last 4 weeks in five different cities in Australia including Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart.

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