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the chart below show the number of graduated student from university in United States from 1960 to 1963

the chart below show the number of graduated student from university in United States from 1960 to 1963 EwK7L
The provided bar chart illustrates the percentage of students who graduated from university in four different regions namely England, Wales, Scotland and Northern Ireland from 1960 to 1963. Overall, it can be seen that there has generally been a steady decrease in the graduation rate between 1960 and 1963, except in Scotland. England and Scotland took the leading positions with the highest percentage at the shown time In 1960, 6. 8% of students in England were graduated and making it the country that had the highest graduated students. The only country with the smallest percentage of students who graduated was Wales, with a rate of 5. 4%. 6. 1% of graduated students came from Scotland. Both countries namely England and Wales saw a slow decline in the percentage of graduated students in 1963. In England, the percentage fell to 6. 5% and in Wales, it dropped to 5. 0%. Between 1960 and 1963, Scotland was the only country that had a growth percentage of graduated students. In 1960, it had 6. 1% of students who ended college time. This increased to 6. 7% in 1963, making it the country with the highest graduate student rate of the four regions. Northern Ireland was the country with the largest drop in the graduation rate. It fell from 5. 6% to 4. 6%.
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between 1960 and 1963, except in Scotland. England and Scotland took the leading positions with the highest
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at the shown time

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of 5. 4%. 6. 1% of graduated
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came from Scotland. Both
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in 1963. In England, the
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fell to 6. 5% and in Wales, it dropped to 5. 0%.

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who ended college time. This increased to 6. 7% in 1963, making it the
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of the four regions. Northern Ireland was the
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