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The chart below show the agricultural production

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The visual representation gives information on two various fields, divided into four main agricultural products: meat, dairy, vegetables and grain. In Eastern, the most abundant agricultural material is Meat, following by Dairy, with 30 per cent, Vegetables and Grain show an insignificant gap between, by 5 per cent. The last two groups denote the lowest contribution in agro-zootechnical production, by twenty and fifteen per cent. Turning to the Western region, Grain presents an enormous percentage with nearly half of the production share (45%). Although, the proportion of Meat is the same in both pie graphs. In comparison, Dairy is only half of the percentage, and Vegetables are less than four times of the Eastern’ production. Overall, the most noticeable information, provided by the visuals, is the difference of Grain, in percentage, in the two territories, while the Meat has the same per cent. The lowest value is claimed by the Western’ Vegetables with only five per cent.

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vegetables
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 are less than four times of the Eastern’ production.

Overall
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