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The chart below show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1995, 2005, and 2015.

The chart below show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1995, 2005, and 2015. mPw8
The pie chart illustrates percentage of numerous disciplines offered at the National University in the years 1995, 2005, and 2015. In general, Computer Science sit on the top as the most popular degree in each year, while Law is the least granted among other study programs in all academic years. In 1995, around a third of prospective students was granted by Computer Science. This proportion was exactly the same as Business whereas remained composition was fulfilled by Medicine at a quarter of total population and Law as the least at 15 percent. Ten years later, the overall proportion did not change significantly. Computer Science was still the most likely enrolled program at 40%. But, the second was Medicine at one third followed by Business program at an average twenty percent. Still, Law was only about 10% chosen by prospective students. In 2015, the depiction was quite still in the similar composition as Computer Science was on the top among other programs followed by Medicine which constituted for around 25%. Then, Business and Law had the same percentage at around fifteen percent.
The pie chart illustrates percentage of numerous disciplines offered at the National University in the years 1995, 2005, and 2015.

In general
, Computer
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Science
sit on the top as the most popular degree in each year, while
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Law
is the least granted among other study
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programs
in all academic years.

In 1995, around a third of prospective students
was granted
by Computer
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Science
. This proportion was exactly the same as Business whereas remained composition
was fulfilled
by Medicine at a quarter of total population and
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Law
as the least at 15 percent.

Ten years later, the
overall
proportion did not
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change
significantly
. Computer
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Science
was
still
the most likely enrolled
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program
at 40%.
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But
, the second was Medicine at one third followed by Business
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program
at an average twenty percent.
Still
,
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Law
was
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only
about 10% chosen by prospective students.

In 2015, the depiction was quite
still
in the similar composition as Computer
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Science
was on the top among other
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programs
followed by Medicine which constituted for around 25%. Then, Business and
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Law
had the same percentage at around fifteen percent.
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