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The chart below provides information about the household percentage of expenses on vital goods in Japan in 1995 and 2011 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The chart below provides information about the household percentage of expenses on vital goods in Japan in 1995 and 2011 rGOa6

The two pie charts show the result about the household percentage of expenses on vital goods in japan in the period of 1995 and 2011. On the whole, it witnessed a fluctuative trend in 2011. Taking the first chart, the food income spent at 68% and this indicated a gradual decrease by 9% in 2011. In addition, it had the highest cost of the household in the food. Likewise, in 1995, clothing had the percentage at 19% which declined marginally to 18% in 16 years later. Turning to the medicine, it reached the lowest charge at 4% in 1995 whereas there was a steady rise at 11% in 2011. Additionally, the both charts had the lowest duty in 1995 and 2011. Moving to the household goods, it achieved the outcome at 9% in 1995 and it just over 12% in 2011, respectively. From these charts, it can be noticed that medicine had the smaller revenue than the other vital goods owing to the fact that not several people are sick and they do not really need to buy the drugs or medicine.

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charts
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show
 the result about the household percentage of expenses on vital This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
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in japan in
 the period of 1995 and 2011. On the whole
, it witnessed a Possible spelling mistake found.fluctuatefluctuatingfluctuation
fluctuative
 trend in 2011.

Taking the first
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chart
, the food income spent at 68% and this indicated a gradual decrease by 9% in 2011. In addition
, it had the highest cost of the household in the food. Likewise
, in 1995, clothing had the percentage at 19% which declined marginally
 to 18% in 16 years later.

Turning to the medicine, it reached the lowest charge at 4% in 1995 whereas there was a steady rise at 11% in 2011. Additionally
, the both You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblueprintgraphsketchtable
charts
 had the lowest duty in 1995 and 2011. Moving to the household This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
, it achieved the outcome at 9% in 1995 and it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 over 12% in 2011, respectively
.

From these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblueprintgraphsketchtable
charts
, it can be noticed
 that medicine had the smaller revenue than the other vital This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 owing to the fact that not several This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).sick, and
sick and
 they do not really
 need to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 the drugs or medicine. 