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the chart below illustrate the annual spending by a UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

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The pie charts compare the yearly expenditure of a UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Overall, the salaries for teachers accounted for the largest part over these three years constantly, while the cost of insurance was always the smallest part of all school spending over the same period of time. Teachers’ salaries constituted 40% in 1981 the increased 10 percent after a decade, which means it became half part of total spending in 1991. After that, it slightly declined to 48% in 2001. On the other hand, same as human resource, money for other workers’ salaries gradually decreased every ten years, from 28% (in 1981) to 22% (in 1991) then reached at only 15% (in 2001). Essential resources such as books shared the same proportion (15%) with furniture and equipment in 1981. In 1991, school spent more in books and much less in furniture and equipment by contrast. But after another 10 years later, resources like books only made up to only 9% of total school spending while the percentage of furniture and equipment increased to 20.
The pie charts compare the yearly expenditure of a UK
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in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

Overall
, the salaries for teachers accounted for the largest part over these three years
constantly
, while the cost of insurance was always the smallest part of all
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school
spending over the same period of time.

Teachers’ salaries constituted 40% in 1981 the increased 10 percent after a decade, which means it became half part of total spending in 1991. After that, it
slightly
declined to 48% in 2001.
On the other hand
, same as human resource, money for other workers’ salaries
gradually
decreased every ten years, from 28% (in 1981) to 22% (in 1991) then reached at
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15% (in 2001).

Essential resources such as books shared the same proportion (15%) with furniture and equipment in 1981. In 1991,
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school
spent more in books and much less in furniture and equipment by contrast.
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after another 10 years later, resources like books
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made up to
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only
9% of total
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spending while the percentage of furniture and equipment increased to 20.

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