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The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, 2021, and future projections for 2025.

The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, 2021, and future projections for 2025. mgB8
The bar charts illustrate the money receive from exports in International tourism, dairy products, and meat products in Southland in the year 2000, 2021, and 2025. The unit of money is measure in billion euro. Overall, it is noticeable that International tourism is the majority of exports for Southland. However, meat production receive the least amount of billion euro of all three main exports. Interestingly, dairy products in 2021 is highest among other product. Focusing on International tourist and meat product, it is noticeable that the money receive from tourists are continually increase overtime (about 8. 2 billion euros to 9. 8 billion euros) at a constant amount while meat products is constantly decreasing from 6 billion euros to 5 billion euros. Furthermore, by the year 2025, there is a prediction that Southland will receive approximately 10 billion euros from international tourism, which is the highest amount of all time. Turning to Dairy products, Southland get the most of the money from market overseas in 2021 and 2025, nearly 10 billion euros and about 9. 4 billion euros, respectively. However, about 7 billion euros profit is receive in 2000 which is the least amount of money for the production from cow.
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from exports in
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tourism, dairy
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meat
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in Southland in the year 2000, 2021, and 2025. The unit of
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tourism is the majority of exports for Southland.
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,
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meat
production
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the least
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of all three main exports.
Interestingly
, dairy
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in 2021 is highest among other product.

Focusing on
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International
tourist and
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meat
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, it is noticeable that the
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from tourists are
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, Southland
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from market overseas in 2021 and 2025,
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in 2000 which is the least
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for the production from cow.
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