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The chart below gives information about people who are working full time.

The chart below gives information about people who are working full time. QwYE1
The bar chart illustrates data about the number of men and women who has a full-time job. Overall; as it can be seen, the number of men who were working full time was higher than women; however, this number for women rose significantly over the 88 years. According to the bar chart; in 1924, the number of males who had a full-time job was 3000, while at that time there weren’t any women who had a full-time job. In the next 28 years the proportion of full-time workers in both genders rose and for women reached approximately 500 meanwhile the number of men full-time workers reached over 4000. As it can be viewed, In 1984 the number of men who are working full time was roughly 5000 and it increased for the next 28 years it reached to a peak (nearly 6000). In the same period, the proportion of women full-time workers rose from under 2000 to around 5000.
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According to the bar chart; in 1924, the
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of males
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had a full-time job was 3000, while at that time there weren’t any
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had a full-time job.

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reached approximately 500 meanwhile the
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full-time workers reached over 4000.

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, In 1984 the
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of
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men
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are working full time was roughly 5000 and it increased for the
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28 years it reached to a peak (
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full-time workers rose from under 2000 to around 5000.
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IELTS academic The chart below gives information about people who are working full time.

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