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The given Graph illustrates the different sources that cause air pollutants in the uk, Starting from 1990 to 2005 respectively. overall, There are four different types of sources that generate air polluta nts. The polluants from tranport remained steadily. while, Household Pollutants was drastically declined. Moreover, the pollutants released from industries and total Air pollutants was significantly fallen down. Firstly, The pollutants emitted by the Transport System maintained constant flow from begining of 1990 to 2025, Air pollutants which are 7. 5 million tonnes were reduced to 3. 5 million tonnes. Secondly, The emmissons that results to air pollutants caused by Industries and Air Pollutants were decreased their level by the end. Invalues, it ranged from 5. 7 to 2 millions. whereas, pollutants from Tansport was recorded as constantly without any changes. Infigures, it is estimated as 1. 5million tonnes were emmitted.
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pollutants

in the
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uk
, Starting from 1990 to 2005
respectively
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overall
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different
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polluta nts
. The
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polluants
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tranport
remained
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while
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declined.
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pollutants
released from industries and

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total
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Air
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pollutants
was
significantly
fallen down.

Firstly
, The
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pollutants
emitted by the Transport System maintained constant flow from

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begining
of 1990 to 2025,
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Air
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pollutants
which are 7. 5 million tonnes were
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reduced
to 3. 5 million tonnes.

Secondly
, The
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emmissons
that results to
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air
pollutants

caused by Industries and
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Air
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Pollutants
were decreased
their level by the
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end
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Invalues
, it ranged from

5. 7 to 2 millions.

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whereas
,
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pollutants
from
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Tansport
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