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Population of India and China between 2000 and 2050-line graph

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The line graph depicts the population of India and China for the year between 2000 and 2050. Overall, we can see that the population among India and China has experienced a increasing trend. In the beginnings of 2000's it is readily apparent that China had the most population with 1. 5 billion people followed by India with a population of 1 billion increasing each year until the early 2020. Looking into the future, in the year 2030, both the countries will have the same population of 1. 45 billion. After this China's population is likely to fall slightly to 1. 4 billion in 2050 while India's population will probably increase and reach 1. 6 billion
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of India and China for the year between 2000 and 2050.
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that the
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among India and China has experienced
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with 1. 5
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followed by India with a
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of 1
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increasing each year until the early 2020. Looking into the future, in the year 2030, both the countries will have the same
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population
of 1. 45
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this China's
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is likely to fall
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in 2050 while India's
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will
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IELTS academic Population of India and China between 2000 and 2050-line graph

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