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The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar graph depicts data about the wealth distribution by various regions and global population percentage in eight different areas namely, North America, China, Other Asia Pacefic, India, Euruope, Africa, Latin America and Caribean, and Rich Asia Pacefic. Firstly, North America has slightly more than 5% population percentage and a little less than 35% global wealth. China on the contrary has less than 5% global wealth and almost 25% population. Similar trend can be observed in Other Asia and India with same 16% population and less than 5% global wealth. Europe has more population in relation to North America (15%) but less wealth (30%). Africa, and Latin America show trend where more percentage of population can be observed being 10% and 7% respectively. However, global wealth remained less almost negligible in Africa and almost 5% in Latin America. Rich Asia has population of 5% and high wealth percentage of almost 25%. Overall, places like North America, Europe, Rich Asia has less population percentage and more global wealth. However, other nations such as China, Other Asia Pacefic, India, Africa, Latin America have more population and less global wealth.
The bar graph depicts data about the
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distribution by various regions and
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population
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America, China,
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Asia
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, Africa,
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America and
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Firstly
,
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North
America has
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population
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. China
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. Similar trend can
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in
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Asia and India with same 16%
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population
and
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less
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. Europe has more
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in relation to
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North
America (15%)
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Africa, and
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America
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remained
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negligible in Africa and
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5% in
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America. Rich Asia has
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Overall
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North
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population
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wealth
.
However
,
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nations such as China,
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Asia
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, India, Africa,
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America have more
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IELTS academic The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region.

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