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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

The bar graph illustrates, detail about distribution of wealth by region and global population percentages. The green color indicates population. Whereas, pink color is for global wealth. The second highest populated countries are Other Asia Pacific and India with amlost equal percentage which is approximately 17%. Followed by, Europe with exactly 15% population. Thereafter, Africa is on dot 10% population. Then, North America and Latin America and Caribean are a little more than 5%. However, in global wealth the second last nations are China and Other Asia Pacific whose percentages are indentical to each other which is 3%. Next, region with a little less than 5% in global wealth is Latin America and Caribean. Thus, Rich Asia-Pacific is slightly below 25% in global wealth. Hence, the senond highest area amongest global wealth distribution is Europe with 30%. Therefore, the maximum global wealth share is seen with North America which is almost 35%. On the other hand, the minimum global wealth percentage is found to be in India and Africa which is negligible. The highest population is in China nearly 25%. On the contrary, the lowest population is in Rich Asia-Pacific which is exactly 5%.
The bar graph illustrates, detail about distribution of
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wealth
by region and
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global
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population
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percentages
. The green color indicates
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population
. Whereas, pink color is for
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global
wealth.

The second highest populated countries are
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Other
Asia Pacific and India with
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amlost
equal
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percentage
which is approximately 17%. Followed by, Europe with exactly 15%
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population
. Thereafter, Africa is on dot 10%
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population
. Then, North America and Latin America and
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Caribean
are a
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little
more than 5%.
However
, in
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global
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wealth
the second last nations are China and
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Other
Asia Pacific whose
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percentages
are
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indentical
to each
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other
which is 3%.
Next
, region with a
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little
less than 5% in
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global
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wealth
is Latin America and
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Caribean
.
Thus
, Rich Asia-Pacific is
slightly
below 25% in
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global
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wealth
.
Hence
, the
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senond
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highest
area
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amongest
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global
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wealth
distribution is Europe with 30%.

Therefore
, the maximum
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global
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wealth
share is
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seen
with North America which is almost 35%. On the
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other
hand, the minimum
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global
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wealth
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percentage
is found
to be in India and Africa which is negligible. The highest
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population
is in China
nearly
25%.
On the contrary
, the lowest
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population
is in Rich Asia-Pacific which is exactly 5%.
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IELTS academic The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
194 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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