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The chart below compares information about three categories of people, based on weight, and the calories they burn doing different activities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below compares information about three categories of people, based on weight, and the calories they burn doing different activities. bENyQ
The given table present information of three group of people with different weight that doing various activities to burn their calories in half an hour. Overall, it is showing that people with heavier weight burn considerably higher calories than lighter weight people, while the activity of jumping rope has the highest calories burned compared to lifting weight which has the lowers calories burned. The data illustrate jumping rope has the markedly massive calories burned in three group of people, 185 pound person have the substantial amount of calories burned with 440 per 30 minutes, whereas 125 pound exercisers have lower amount of 288 burned. The second place for calories burn activities is joggling, 185 pound weight group have a massive quantity of 402 calories burned; likewise, the lightest people group at 125 pound, can burn 265 calories in half an hour. The activity lifting weights has the meagre calories burned compared to others, it mere has 131 calories burned in people weighted 185 and only 92 calories burned in 125 pound person. Turning to people who is weight 125 pound, interestingly, they have same amount of calories burned when they play soccer and stationary bike.
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table present information of three
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different
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that doing various
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to
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their calories in half an hour.
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with heavier
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considerably
higher calories than lighter
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weight
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people
, while the
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of jumping rope has the highest calories
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compared to lifting
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weight
which has the lowers calories burned.

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massive calories
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burned
in three
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people
,
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185 pound
person have the substantial amount of calories
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burned
with 440 per 30 minutes, whereas
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125 pound
exercisers have lower amount of 288
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. The second place for calories
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activities
is joggling,
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185 pound
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weight
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group
have a massive quantity of 402 calories
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;
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, the lightest
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125 pound
, can
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265 calories in half an hour.
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The
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lifting
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weights
has the
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meagre
calories
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burned
compared to others,
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it mere
has 131 calories
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in
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people
weighted 185 and
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92 calories
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125 pound
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Turning to
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is
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125 pound
,
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, they have same
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amount
of calories
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burned
when they play soccer and stationary bike.

IELTS academic The chart below compares information about three categories of people, based on weight, and the calories they burn doing different activities.

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