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The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan.

The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. OVlxM
The chart and table illustrates the number of people in japan constituting past, present and future trends from 1950 to 2055. The unit of measurement is in millions. Overall, the population rose steadily till 2005 and thereafter a significant decrease in these figures can be observed. The number of people as well as the proportion of the total population aged 65 years or over, almost have a similar trend. Between 1950 and 2005, the Japanese observed a steady growth in the total population starting from 84. 1 million to 127. 8 million. After this point, the forecasted trend shows that these number experienced a fall from 127. 8 million in 2010 to 89. 9 million in 2055. Considering the 65 years old people, their numbers rose sharply till 2035 and then a slight drop, reached to 36. 5 million in 2055, whereas the percentage of total population of 65 years old or over has increased sharply from 4. 9% to 41% through a century period.
The chart and table illustrates the
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in japan constituting past, present and future trends from 1950 to 2055. The unit of measurement is in millions.

Overall
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population
rose
steadily
till 2005 and thereafter a significant decrease in these figures can
be observed
. The
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number
of
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people
as well
as the proportion of the total
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aged 65 years or over, almost have a similar trend.

Between 1950 and 2005, the Japanese observed a steady growth in the total
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population
starting from 84. 1
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million
to 127. 8
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million
. After this point, the forecasted trend
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shows
that these
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experienced a fall from 127. 8
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million
in 2010 to 89. 9
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million
in 2055.

Considering the 65 years
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old
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people
, their
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rose
sharply
till 2035 and then a slight drop, reached to 36. 5
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million
in 2055, whereas the percentage of total
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population
of 65 years
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old
or over has increased
sharply
from 4. 9% to 41% through a century period.
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