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The chart above, illustrates four factors regarding the standards of life in different countries (Bangladesh, Bolivia, Egypt, Indonesia, USA).

The chart above, illustrates four factors regarding the standards of life in different countries (Bangladesh, Bolivia, Egypt, Indonesia, USA). qV0BP
Overall, USA is ahead in the first three sections, by a significant amount, while Bangladesh has the lowest trend in the same sectors. As for infant mortality rate, Bangladesh has the largest amount, whereas USA the least. USA’s gross national product per person, is more than 13 thousand dollars, in contrast to Bangladesh that stands at140 dollars. Bolivia and Indonesia have a similar trend, and Egypt is only 110 dollars above the latter. Americans have the highest calorie consumption per day at 2653 calories, whereas Bangladesh only just over half of that. The remaining countries have an average of 2000 to 3000 calories per day. Life expectancy, is significantly higher in America at 74 years of age, following this is Egypt at 56 and the rest have 50, 49 and 40 respectively (Bolivia, Indonesia, Bangladesh). Lastly, infant mortality, is impressively high in Bangladesh at 132 per 1000 births, while Bolivia is close by with 124. Moreover, Indonesia has a 6. 5 times higher trend than USA’s, that is 12 in 1000 births.
Overall
, USA is ahead in the
first
three sections, by a significant amount, while Bangladesh has the lowest trend in the same sectors. As for infant mortality rate, Bangladesh has the largest amount, whereas USA the least.

USA’s gross national product per person, is more than 13 thousand dollars,
in contrast
to Bangladesh that stands at140 dollars. Bolivia and Indonesia have a similar trend, and Egypt is
only
110 dollars above the latter. Americans have the highest calorie consumption per day at 2653 calories, whereas Bangladesh
only
just
over half of that. The remaining countries have an average of 2000 to 3000 calories per day.

Life expectancy, is
significantly
higher in America at 74 years of age, following this is Egypt at 56 and the rest have 50, 49 and 40
respectively
(Bolivia, Indonesia, Bangladesh).
Lastly
, infant mortality, is
impressively
high in Bangladesh at 132 per 1000 births, while Bolivia is close by with 124.
Moreover
, Indonesia has a 6. 5 times higher trend than USA’s,
that is
12 in 1000 births.
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IELTS academic The chart above, illustrates four factors regarding the standards of life in different countries (Bangladesh, Bolivia, Egypt, Indonesia, USA).

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