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The bar chart provides information about the virus case in ASEAN. Singapore had the highest amount of cases, while Laos had the least total of cases. Indonesia is the second highest with the total 11. 396 cases. The table shows the amount of people that confirmed, death and recovered In three different regions of Indonesia According to the bar chart, Singapore was the high rise following by Indonesia, Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand, Vietnam, Myanmar, Brunei, Cambodia and last but not least Laos with the lowest number of affected people. Singapore and Indonesia only got a slight different whilst Singapore and Laos got a big difference. The table shows that Jakarta had the highest amount of confirmed and dead people, whereas east Java had the lowest number of affected and dying people. East Java and West Java only got a slight difference of confirmed people, on the other hand the number of death people in West Java was the least from the three other regions.
The bar chart provides information about the virus case in ASEAN. Singapore had the highest amount of cases, while Laos had the least total of cases. Indonesia is the second highest with the total 11. 396 cases. The table
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