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The Changes in Exports in HK Billions Between 2009 and 2010

The Changes in Exports in HK Billions Between 2009 and 2010 mLkDN

the table compares and contrasts data on the changes in exports of five items in H. K. over a 2 year period from 2009 to 2010. In General, the number of exports of all items increased with notable exception of manufacturing which experienced dramatic fall over the same period. As can be observed in table, in 2010 Metals surged at 122 %, gaining 5. 1 billion HK dollars from 2. 3 billion in 2009. Furthermore, same pattern was followed by telecommunication with a sharp rise of 61% to 12. 7 billion leading the exported items in 2010, while equipment marginally increased by 13% at 11. 6 billion dollars. Similarly, manufacturing and clothing experienced downfall in exports with a drop from 5. 5 billion to 4 billion and 6 billion to 5 billion respectively making them only two items experiencing negative growth by 2010.

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billion
 leading the exported You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinformationcomponentfeatureelementthingpiece
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