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The cart below shows total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three cateegories, from 1995-2002.

The cart below shows total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three cateegories, from 1995-2002. 2eOA
The bar chart provides information about whole number of minutes of three various type of telephone calls in the UK between 1995 and 2002. Overall, national and international fixed line and mobiles experienced an upward trend, while local fixed line showed remained steady throught the period. Minutes of local type telephone call had some fluctations. Although, national and international telephone call initially had lower minute, they outraced local telephone call at the end of the period. The minutes of local telephone call was about 72 in 1995, being higher than national and international and mobiles minutes by approximately 34 and 65, respectively. Then, it rose to almost in 1996. It increased from 80 to 90 during the next three years. However, it continued to decline steadily to the end of the period, reaching around 85 in 2000 and 79 in 2001 and reached it's lowest point in 2002. National and international and mobiles minutes stood at approximately 38 and 8 in 1995, respectively. Both telephone calls continued to climbed rapidly to the end of the year and peak minutes of them showed in 2002.
The bar chart provides information about whole number of minutes of three various type of
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in the UK between 1995 and 2002.

Overall
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national
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international
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line and mobiles experienced an upward trend, while
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local
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fixed
line
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showed
remained steady
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throught
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local
type
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telephone
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call
had
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fluctations
. Although,
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national
and
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international
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telephone
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call
initially
had lower
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minute
, they outraced
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local
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telephone
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call
at the
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end
of the period.

The minutes of
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local
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telephone
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call
was about 72 in 1995, being higher than
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national
and
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international
and mobiles minutes by approximately 34 and 65,
respectively
. Then, it rose to almost in 1996. It increased from 80 to 90 during the
next
three years.
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steadily
to the
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of the period, reaching around 85 in 2000 and 79 in 2001 and reached
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2002. National
and
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international
and mobiles minutes stood at approximately 38 and 8 in 1995,
respectively
. Both
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continued to climbed
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to the
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of the year and peak minutes of them
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in 2002.
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