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The blue print presents information about the comparison of layout in Southwest Airport in today’s and in the next year after renovation.

The blue print presents information about the comparison of layout in Southwest Airport in today’s and in the next year after renovation. eEdgV
The blue print presents information about the comparison of layout in Southwest Airport in today’s and in the next year after renovation. Generally, there a similar layout in the both blue prints such as the entrance gate of departure and arrival. However, there some expansion flight gate in the next map. Following this maps, now the departures and arrivals gates located in the south of airport as well as in the future. in departure area there only have a check-in counter and cafe whereas in the new plan there is an additional bag drop in there. The additional facilities is clearly in arrivals area where in today’s none of facility in there, but next year will have a cafe, ATM, and car rent counter. In the both layouts the location of security passport control in departures area have a similarities with the future projection, as well as in passport control custom in arrivals area. However, in the next year, there is numerous shops after security check in departure area. The glimpse of distinction on these maps, today’s there is 8 gates and can be access by walk. On the contrary, in next projection, there is two wings in the left wing side there is 9 gates and 9 gates again in the right hand side. Additionally, all gates connecting with a sky train.
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whereas in the new plan there is an additional bag drop in there. The additional facilities is
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where in
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year will have a
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, ATM, and car rent counter. In the both layouts the location of security passport control in
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area
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projection,
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connecting with a sky train.
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IELTS academic The blue print presents information about the comparison of layout in Southwest Airport in today’s and in the next year after renovation.

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