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map Shows library plan of 2001 and 2009 describe the map and compare if needed

map Shows library plan of 2001 and 2009 describe the map and compare if needed 110d7
The map portrays the transformation of library plan from 2001 to 2009. There are several changes that have made till second year. To embark with, the entrance, librarian desk as well as stairs have remained at the same place that is on the south side of a map whereas, table's furniture which was placed on centre, was changed from multiples of square to rectangle shape. Moreover, there was a newspaper and periodicals on the east side of the previous layout however, now demarcated with films and DVD section. Moving further, plethora of new sections were added on the extreme left vertical side of library, namely- Kitchen, Economies and Law in 2009. In addition, Fiction section was also moved from north side to east side of plan. Apart from it, library has moved itself from traditional one to modern one by installing IT facilities in it such as computer next ti Films and DVDs section in the next year. To conclude, there was a massive transformation in the layout of library in comparison to previous year that is 2001
The map portrays the transformation of library plan from 2001 to 2009. There are several
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
that have made till second year.

To embark with, the entrance, librarian desk
as well
as stairs have remained at the same place
that is
on the south side of a map whereas, table's furniture which
was placed
on
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.
centre
, was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
from multiples of square to rectangle shape.
Moreover
, there was a newspaper and periodicals on the east side of the previous layout
however
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
demarcated with films and DVD section.

Moving
further
, plethora of new sections were
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
added
on the extreme
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
vertical side of library,
namely
- Kitchen, Economies and Law in 2009.
In addition
, Fiction section was
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
from north side to east side of plan. Apart from it, library has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
itself from traditional one to modern one by installing IT facilities in it such as computer
next
ti Films and DVDs section in the
next
year.

To conclude
, there was a massive transformation in the layout of library
in comparison
to previous year
that is
2001
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IELTS academic map Shows library plan of 2001 and 2009 describe the map and compare if needed

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