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City hospital neighborhood

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The map of the city hospital and its neighboring district is shown in two different years, 2007 and 2010. The city hospital is encircled by a ring road which on the south side of the hospital is connected to the hospital road that leads to conjunction further south with the city road. As you move south in the Hospital road you can see six bus stops which are located on both sides of the road. Just alongside the Hospital road on its eastern side, there is a parking facility, open for both staff and public use. There are some changes after 2007 which are illustrated in the 2010 version of the map. Two roundabouts are constructed at the junction of Hospital road with both City road and the ring road. The bus stops in the Hospital road are removed from their previous location and relocated to the western side of the road; This new bus station is accessible via two roads which are connected to the new roundabouts separately. And the last change is the construction of a new parking lot for public use which is located on the eastern side of the ring road around the hospital and the old location will be staff-only.
The map of the city
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hospital
and its neighboring district
is shown
in two
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different
years, 2007 and 2010. The city
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hospital
is encircled
by a ring
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road
which on the south side of the
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hospital
is connected
to the
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hospital
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road
that leads to conjunction
further
south with the city
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road
. As you
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move
south in the
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Hospital
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road
you can
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see
six bus
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stops
which
are located
on both
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sides
of the
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road
.
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Just
alongside the
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Hospital
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road
on its eastern side, there is a parking facility, open for both staff and public
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use
. There are
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some
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changes
after 2007 which
are illustrated
in the 2010 version of the map. Two roundabouts
are constructed
at the junction of
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Hospital
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road
with both City
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road
and the ring
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road
. The bus
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stops
in the
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Hospital
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road
are removed
from their previous location and relocated to the western side of the
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road
; This new bus station is accessible via two
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roads
which
are connected
to the new roundabouts
separately
. And the last
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change
is the construction of a new parking lot for public
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use
which
is located
on the eastern side of the ring
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road
around the
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hospital
and the
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old
location will be staff-
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only
.
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IELTS academic City hospital neighborhood

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205 words
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