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The below mentioned table of statistics shows the consumption of consumer durables by the people of Britain from 1972 to 1983 in percentage.

The below mentioned table of statistics shows the consumption of consumer durables by the people of Britain from 1972 to 1983 in percentage. lj7bK

The below mentioned table of statistics shows the consumption of consumer durables by the people of Britain from 1972 to 1983 in percentage. According to table people use to spend their most of the time in watching TV as the average percentage from 1972-1983 is above 95%. Central heating is mainly used in winters that is 4 months in the year. Videos come into the trend from the 1983 as in that times videos were not available easily, Vacuum cleaner is the second most usable item among all the daily routine resources as shown in table, because it made easy to clean anything with less efforts with effective result. Remaining, all refrigerator, washing machine, telephone and dishwasher are used rarely but from 1980's the consumption start rising from decreasing rate, apparently people are now in habit to use the technical resources to reduce the time consumption and making things done more effectively and efficiently. We reached to the conclusion of people are showing the interest and making their habit of doing work with updated technologies as compared to 1970's for doing their day -to -day activities.

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people
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