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Look at the maps showing how the town of harborne change from 1936 to 2007.

Look at the maps showing how the town of harborne change from 1936 to 2007. qkEBw

The given maps show evolve of Harbone town in the year 1936 to 2007. Time period of a 61 years. Examining the map of the year 1936, there was one river in nothern east part of the town, oppisite to in sourthern east government office and for farm land was situated. There was only one transport cycle path in western South direction. While six different kinds of commercial buildings situated in the center of the town, which was Post office, Sweet Shop, Butchers, Flower Shop band and Library. By 2007 several changes to play, the biggest change was occurred with the river, there was no water body part at all, Instead of a residential area established. Cycle path developed to the road path, while government office was converted to museum and farmland to the sport ground of Golf Course. Although, in the central part of the town, post office bank and library remain as it is, switch SOP and purchase combined and converted to supermarket as the same as a flower soap into travel agent. All in all, there was a vital change can be seen in town in time period of 61 years.

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town
 in the year 1936 to 2007. Time period of a 61 years.

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 and for farm land was situated
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 one transport cycle path in western South direction. While six This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
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 kinds of commercial buildings situated in the center of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
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, which was Post You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
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, Sweet Shop, Butchers, Flower Shop band and Library.

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 of a residential area established. Cycle path developed to the road path, while This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
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was converted
 to museum and farmland to the sport ground of Golf Course. Although, in the central part of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
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, post You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
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 bank and library remain as it is, switch SOP and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
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 combined and converted to supermarket as the same as a flower soap into travel agent.

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 in time period of 61 years. 