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The bart chart shows the monthly spending dollar of a family in the USA on the items in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reportig the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bart chart shows the monthly spending dollar of a family in the USA on the items in 2010. km7N
The bar chart indicates the monthly spending money in dollars of a family in the USA. Overall, every item has some fluctuations for each of the months, however, almost always on average or even more. The first month which is January. The most spending item is food with around 500 dollars, as the gas is about 350 dollars and clothing approximately 230 dollar respectively. When we take a look at the second month which is February. The food is again on the top of the bar chart with nearly 580 dollars. On the other hand, the gas has diminished almost to 230 dollars and the clothing is around 590 dollars. The third month is March. The food and the gas have decreased approximately to 430 and 300 dollars. On the contrary, the clothing has increased a bit to compare with other months. It has boosted around to 360 dollars. The fourth and final month is April. The food has decreased by around 330 dollars per month. The gas, however, is up to nearly 585 dollars and the clothing is about 640 dollars.
The bar chart indicates the monthly spending money in
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of a family in the USA.

Overall
, every item has
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some
fluctuations for each of the
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months
,
however
, almost always on average or even more.

The
first
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month
which is January. The most spending item is
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food
with
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around
500
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dollars
, as the
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gas
is about 350
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dollars
and clothing approximately 230
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dollar
respectively
.

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When
we take a look at the second
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month
which is February. The
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food
is again on the top of the bar chart with
nearly
580 dollars.

On the other hand
, the
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gas
has diminished almost to 230
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dollars
and the clothing is
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around
590 dollars.

The third
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month
is March. The
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food
and the
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gas
have decreased approximately to 430 and 300
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dollars
.
On the contrary
, the clothing has increased a bit to compare with other
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months
. It has boosted
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around
to 360 dollars.

The fourth and final
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month
is April. The
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food
has decreased by
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around
330
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dollars
per
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month
.
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The
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gas
,
however
, is up to
nearly
585
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dollars
and the clothing is about 640
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dollars
.
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IELTS academic The bart chart shows the monthly spending dollar of a family in the USA on the items in 2010.

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182 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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