Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

the table below shows the percentage of journey by different medium and the bar graph talk about the reasons for travelling.

the table below shows the percentage of journey by different medium and the bar graph talk about the reasons for travelling. raL6m
The table illustrates the people's transportation medium in various countries (Canada, Belgium, Germany and Netherland) whilst the bar-chart depicts the reasons for Canadians to use cars. Overall, in all the countries, trips made by cars were the highest while travelling methods excluding bicycles, public transports and on foot were least popular. In Canada, most citizens used cars as there were no alternatives and a small number of people working nightshifts, utilized cars. According to the table, 90% people of Canada journeyed by car when only about half the inhabitants of Netherland used the same transportation medium. Bicycle was unpopular in all the nations except Netherland (26%). Germans had the highest users of public transport while Netherland had the highest number of citizens (15%) who moved on foot. Other means of travel were rarely used. Among the Canadians, the main reason to avail cars was the lack of alternatives followed by the need for work, convenience, time factor and late night work.
The table illustrates the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
's transportation medium in various countries (Canada, Belgium, Germany and
Possible spelling mistake found.
Netherland
) whilst the bar-chart depicts the reasons for Canadians to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cars
.
Overall
, in all the countries, trips made by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cars
were the highest while travelling methods excluding bicycles, public transports and on foot were least popular. In Canada, most citizens
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cars
as there were no alternatives and a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
number of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
working
Possible spelling mistake found.
nightshifts
, utilized
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cars
. According to the table, 90%
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
of Canada journeyed by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
when
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
about half the inhabitants of
Possible spelling mistake found.
Netherland
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
the same transportation medium. Bicycle was unpopular in all the nations except
Possible spelling mistake found.
Netherland
(26%). Germans had the highest users of public transport while
Possible spelling mistake found.
Netherland
had the highest number of citizens (15%) who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
on foot. Other means of travel were rarely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
. Among the Canadians, the main reason to avail
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cars
was the lack of alternatives followed by the need for work, convenience, time factor and late night work.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic the table below shows the percentage of journey by different medium and the bar graph talk about the reasons for travelling.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
161 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • the table below shows the percentage of journey by different medium and the bar graph talk about the reasons for travelling.