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The bar graph shows the UK phone calls divided into three

The bar graph shows the UK phone calls divided into three WY6Ea
The bar chart illustrates the UK's phone calls divided into local national and international fixed line and mobile calls, between 1995 and 2000. The data has been calibrated in minutes. To begin with the total number of minutes of mobile calls increased slightly from 395 to 2002 which was considered to approximately 45 minutes there had been a slowly go up observed in the phone drinks of national and global fixed line it stood at around 62 minutes for 10 yearsMoving towards in terms of total local phone call which was accounting for 90 minutes interested to a 70 minutes in between 1999 and 2000 do while in the first four years total minut of local phone call grown gradually around 89 minutesOverall it can be seen that local phone calls was significant activity over the given periods while the least activity was making mobile call in the UK
The bar chart illustrates the UK's
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divided into
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national and international
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line and mobile
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, between 1995 and 2000. The data has
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in minutes. To
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begin
with the total number of minutes of mobile
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calls
increased
slightly
from 395 to 2002 which
was considered
to approximately 45 minutes there had been a
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up observed in the
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drinks of national and global
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line it stood at around 62 minutes for 10
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local
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which was accounting for 90 minutes interested to a 70 minutes in between 1999 and 2000 do while in the
first
four years total
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minut
of
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grown
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minutesOverall
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local
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phone
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was significant activity over the
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periods while the least activity was making mobile
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call
in the
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