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Task-1 the pie chart below show the perecntage of dogs of each breed adopted in dogcountry in two different countries

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The two pie charts illustartes adoptionOf dogs breeds in dogcountry in 2010And 2015. Overall it can b seen labrador and golden retriever most Demanded breed for adoption To commence with, in 2010, 35 % labrador were adopted therefore 30% golden retriever. however in 2015 labrador down by 2% and golden retriever upward by 6%. 33% and 36% respectively On the other hand while talking about another breeds they are much lower merit in total. Bulldog adopted 14%in 2010 however 12% in 2015 thus poodles is increased by 3% and 10% in 2015 respectively Beagle declining from 11% in 2010 to 7% in 2015 at last other breed decreased by 1%
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however
in 2015
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labrador
down by 2% and golden retriever upward by 6%. 33% and 36%
respectively


On the other hand
while talking about another
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breeds
they are much lower merit in total. Bulldog adopted 14%in 2010
however
12% in 2015
thus
poodles
is increased
by 3% and 10% in 2015
respectively
Beagle declining from 11% in 2010 to 7% in 2015 at last other
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breed
decreased by 1%
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IELTS academic Task-1 the pie chart below show the perecntage of dogs of each breed adopted in dogcountry in two different countries

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
109 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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