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The line chart compares information on the amount of total spending by each student in public and private educational institutes in the USA over a period of 9 years from 2004 to 2012.

The line chart compares information on the amount of total spending by each student in public and private educational institutes in the USA over a period of 9 years from 2004 to 2012. KG5qk
The line chart compares information on the amount of total spending by each student in public and private educational institutes in the USA over a period of 9 years from 2004 to 2012. Overall, the expenditure for both increased with some minor fluctuations. Additionally, private institutions had more expenditure throughout the period. 2004-2005, had same flow for each which started with just above 21000 for private and around 17500 for public and ended with slight increase. From 2005 to 2009, there was a steady growth, where earlier one had expense of approximately 21500 and further reached close to 22000. Similarly, the latter had range between 18000 and nearly 19000. However, from 2009 onward the style of two line charts changed. In case of private, it surprisingly witnessed decline to about 21500 but soared high for following 2 years and reached slightly above 22000. Whereas for other one the expense inclined with minor variations in that time frame, where in 2011 recorded the highest one by almost 19500. Overall, the expenditure for both increased with some minor fluctuations. Additionally, private institutions had more expenditure throughout the period. 2004-2005, had same flow for each which started with just above 21000 for private and around 17500 for public and ended with slight increase. From 2005 to 2009, there was a steady growth, where earlier one had expense of approximately 21500 and further reached close to 22000. Similarly, the latter had range between 18000 and nearly 19000. However, from 2009 onward the style of two line charts changed. In case of private, it surprisingly witnessed decline to about 21500 but soared high for following 2 years and reached slightly above 22000. Whereas for other one the expense inclined with minor variations in that time frame, where in 2011 recorded the highest one by almost 19500.
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educational institutes in the USA over a period of 9 years from 2004 to 2012.
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expenditure
for both increased with
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2004-2005, had same flow for each which
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private
and around 17500 for public and ended with slight increase. From 2005 to 2009, there was a steady growth, where earlier one had
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expense
of approximately 21500 and
further
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reached
close to 22000.
Similarly
, the latter had range between 18000 and
nearly
19000.
However
, from 2009 onward the style of two line charts
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changed
. In case of
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private
, it
surprisingly
witnessed decline to about 21500
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but
soared high for following 2 years and
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slightly
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22000. Whereas for other one the
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expense
inclined with
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minor
variations in that time frame, where in 2011 recorded the highest one by almost 19500.
Overall
, the
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expenditure
for both increased with
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some
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minor
fluctuations.
Additionally
,
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private
institutions had more
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expenditure
throughout the period.

2004-2005, had same flow for each which
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started
with
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21000 for
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private
and around 17500 for public and ended with slight increase. From 2005 to 2009, there was a steady growth, where earlier one had
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expense
of approximately 21500 and
further
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reached
close to 22000.
Similarly
, the latter had range between 18000 and
nearly
19000.
However
, from 2009 onward the style of two line charts
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changed
. In case of
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private
, it
surprisingly
witnessed decline to about 21500
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but
soared high for following 2 years and
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reached
slightly
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above
22000. Whereas for other one the
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expense
inclined with
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minor
variations in that time frame, where in 2011 recorded the highest one by almost 19500.
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