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The bar graph shows the total number of minutes of three different types of calls in Australia from 2001 to 2008.

The bar graph shows the total number of minutes of three different types of calls in Australia from 2001 to 2008. 1aKkA
The provided vertical bar graph illustrates the total number of minutes of local, National and international and mobile calls in Australia between 2001 and 2008. Overall, it is crystal clear from the chart that most of the people made their calls through local phones over the given time span. It is clear regarding local calls, the maximum number of calls witnessed in 2005, which accounted for 90 billions, whereas the minimum number of calls showed in very first year and in last year, accounting for 72 billions. Before 2005 the number of calls exhibited a rising trend, in last three years it showed a declining trend. Turning to national and international, national and international Calls increased steadily year by year. The figures recorded between 38 billions and 61 billions. coming to mobile calls, it displayed an overall rising trend. Beginning from 2 billions in 2001, the length of minutes escalated 46 billions in 2008.
The provided vertical bar graph illustrates the total
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of minutes of local, National and international and mobile
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in Australia between 2001 and 2008.
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from the chart that most of the
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made their
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through local phones over the
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time span. It is
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regarding local
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, the maximum
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of
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calls
witnessed in 2005, which accounted for 90
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, whereas the minimum
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of
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first
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and in last
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, accounting for 72
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of
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exhibited a rising trend, in last three years it
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a declining trend. Turning to national and international, national and international
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increased
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. The figures recorded between 38
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, it displayed an
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in 2001, the length of minutes escalated 46
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in 2008.
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IELTS academic The bar graph shows the total number of minutes of three different types of calls in Australia from 2001 to 2008.

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